I was behind a truck recently that had a cool LED lighted border around the license plate. Little red lights danced around and framed the driver’s message. Here’s what this driver had displayed on his flashy license plate border:
“If your reading this, than your to close.”
Do you see what I saw? Not one, not two, but four typos! The message should read: Continue reading “The Number One Grammar Mistake In Email, Chat and Text Is….”
I was behind a truck recently that had a cool LED lighted border around the license plate. Little red lights danced around and framed the driver’s message. Here’s what this driver had displayed on his flashy license plate border:
Do you see what I saw? Not one, not two, but four typos! The message should read: Continue reading “For the Last Time, It’s Not Okay to Say, “Your Welcome.””
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Empathy, Casual Language, and Personal Pronouns are the secret to amazing complaint response emails
Have you heard of Blue Apron? It’s a grocery delivery service, basically. You get recipes and perfectly proportioned ingredients sent to you, and all you have to do is whip up gourmet meals in your kitchen. I use services like this literally every week. I just don’t have time to grocery shop with my busy kids and my travel schedule.
Well, the first time I tried Blue Apron, my food box came with a little problem. My bag of lentils had a small hole in it, and the lentils spilled.
I emailed Blue Apron that morning, and two hours later this is the response I got:
Some of you know photography is my passion. Whenever I can steal away to take photos, I seize the opportunity. I had just such an opportunity yesterday.
Yesterday afternoon, after wrapping up a big and successful project for a client, I sat down to edit some black and white photos from my family’s Thanksgiving dinner. Earlier this week I updated my iMac to OS X Yosemite, Mac’s latest upgrade. To my horror, and I mean absolute horror, my photo editing software was not compatible with Mac’s latest upgrade.
After a couple of moments of sheer panic, I realized that certainly there was a quick fix for this. I’d either remove the Mac upgrade or I’d contact the photo editing software maker and get this sorted out. So, I emailed Nik Collection and explained my problem.
Within an hour or so, I got this reply from Nik Software (You’ll need to click the image to enlarge)
Nik Software blew me away with this email response. Here’s what I like about it.
How do your customer service response emails measure up?
Pull out one of your email responses to a customer. How does it measure up to my reaction to the Nik Collection email? Does your email surprise and delight customers? Or does it frustrate customers?
Here’s what I want you to do.
Look for ways to make the customer experience over email as quick and smooth as possible. And add a little surprise and delight when you can. When you do, you’ll make someone’s day with your great emails and you’ll have people bragging and blogging about you!
Here’s one of the photos I recently edited with my Nik Software (My niece on Thanksgiving)
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Last week I talked to you about how to ruin your corporate reputation in just one email thread and I shared an email exchange that just takes the cake. I got a lot of reaction from that blog post. People were utterly appalled at the content and tone of the emails a company representative sent to a customer. Many asked for permission to share my example with their employees. Lots of Customer Service Supervisors and Managers emailed me asking for tips on how to ensure their employees are not sending out bad emails to customers. One thing’s for certain: People are concerned about their email communication with consumers.
For those of you concerned with how your employees are communicating with customers over email, I am holding a 90-minute webinar entitled “Before You Hit Send” to help companies craft professional and friendly emails to customers. The webinar will be held February 16th at 1pm ET. If you miss it, you can get the recording. Below you will find the details.
Myra is often called into companies to help them overcome the perception of “robotic” email responses and to help employees craft personable and friendly emails to customers. In this very special web event, Myra brings her “email intervention” to the public. Join Myra and learn how to craft personal, friendly, error-free emails that not only address customer’s issues, but also leaves them saying “wow.”
What will you learn? Here’s a preview.
So I’m sitting in my office preparing marketing copy for my How to Respond to Customer Emails web training event when my Assistant walks in, takes over my computer and Googles something about an email thread gone wrong. She eagerly tells me about a company’s email thread with a customer that is so shocking that my jaw dropped several times and I found myself saying, ‘wow’ and ‘whoa’ over and over as I read the email thread. My Assistant tells me, “You have to include this example in your webinar!”
The customer in this story emailed the company to get an update on the shipment of his order. The customer service representative replied to the customer’s email simply with a date. No sentence. No explanation. No “thank you for your email.” The reply to the customer read, “December 17th.” Totally unacceptable, in my opinion. Not only is the email cold and unprofessional, but it lacks clarity. Does the order ship on December 17th? Will it arrive on December 17th? Who knows? As bad as that email was, it gets worse. Much worse.
When the customer emails with a follow-up question, here’s what he got from the company:
“Things happen in manufacturing if your unhappy you have 7 days from the day your item ships for a refund. You placed a pre order just like any software title the gets a date moved due to the tweaks and bugs not being worked out and GameStop or any other place holds your cash and im sure you don’t complain to activision or epic games so put on your big boy hat and wait it out like everyone else. The benefit is a token of our appreaciation for everyone no one is special including you or any first time buyer . Feel free to cancel we need the units were back ordered 11,000 units so your 2 will be gone fast. Maybe I’ll put them on eBay for 150.00 myself. Have a good day Dan.”
This response is filled with grammatical and spelling errors and I’m sure the tone of the communication is not what the company intends to convey. But it seems the representative simply took matters into his own hands.
The email thread goes on to be even more appalling with comments from the rep like this:
“We do value our customers but sometimes we get children like you we just have to put you in the corner with your im stupid hat on. See you at CES , E3 , Pax East ….? Oh wait you have to ask mom and pa dukes your not an industry professional and you have no money on snap you just got told.”
(If you are interested, you can read the full transcript of this utterly unprofessional conversation right here.)
Don’t let an email from an untrained employee ruin your credibility and threaten your company’s reputation. Give employees training on how to communicate with customers over email. Responses must be professional. That means we write in complete sentences and we focus on being crystal clear. It means we carefully check our emails for spelling and grammatical errors. It means we are careful never to insult a customer, a vendor, or our own company. It means we treat customers like they sign our paychecks. It means we never put anything in writing that we wouldn’t feel comfortable seeing blasted in social media. Because, believe me, a bad email will end up on Twitter, blogs and FaceBook.
Don’t let a bad email happen to your company! Join me for my famous “How to Respond to Customer Emails” webinar so I can help you avoid nightmares like this one.
How to Respond to Customer Emails
The emails you send say a lot about your company.
Are you sure yours send the right message?
February 16th, 1:00 – 2:30pm ET
Read the full “How to Respond to Customer Emails” web training outline right here.
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